Looking for a generous person to critique my story

I have been working on a collection of short stories and am looking for a creative individual to give me some feedback. This is not a job, just me asking someone out of the kindness of their heart and hopefully a joint appreciation of creativity. This has absolutely nothing to do with photography, but I still figured I’d ask.

Any takers?

by Rachel R. at Mon Sep 08 09:12:36 UTC 2008 (ed. Sep 8 2008) Paris, France | Bookmark |

so where can i see it? or read it?

by Peter Klesken | 08 Sep 2008 11:09 | NYC, United States |

Hi Rachel. I wouldn’t mind giving it a shot. Been a long time since I read anything really creative.

by Wes Shepherd | 08 Sep 2008 12:09 | Toronto, Canada |

I’m interested too. I love the short story as a genre and have a whole shelf full of short story anthologies. I’ve also studied scriptwriting in some detail, and I make my daily living from writing marketing/communication type materials. I’m particularly strong on structure so I can certainly give you good feedback on whether a story is hanging together and whether the elements are balanced.

Tobie

by BignoseTW | 08 Sep 2008 12:09 | Taipei, Taiwan |

ou est la merveille !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by lehr stephane | 08 Sep 2008 12:09 | Paris, France |

first I was emailing it to people… but I guess now I’ll post a link :-)

Warning: It’s an erotic short story. Don’t read it if you’re easily shocked.

Here you go: http://www.rachelrebibo.com/sophie_southern.pdf

by Rachel R. | 08 Sep 2008 13:09 | Paris, France |